Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Final Class, Final Paper, and Final "Exam"

Here's the scoop as we wrap up the year:

We will meet on FRIDAY, May 6 at the usual time to do course evaluations and a few other things.

Your final paper is due at noon on MONDAY, May 9 on your blog.

We will meet in our classroom during exam week, even though you will not be taking a graded exam. We are required to meet once during exam week, so we will be gathering to play a Jeopardy! game to review all the fascinating things learned this semester. Attendance will be recorded just like in any other class. Section 3 will meet at 10:30 on THURSDAY, May 12 and section 4 will meet at 10:30 on TUESDAY, May 10. We'll probably meet for about an hour.

Any questions? Email me! ehenderson@ithaca.edu

Thanks for a great year!

Sunday, May 1, 2011

Class Cancelled Monday

Same deal, guys. I need more time to comment on your narrative drafts, so I'm cancelling class tomorrow, Monday, May 2. Feel free to get started on your revisions as soon as you have comments on your blog. The due date for the final draft of your narrative argument is extended until noon on Monday, May 9.

See you in class on Wednesday. This will be a writing day, so bring any materials with you that you need to work on your revisions. You should also bring your notebook.

Monday, April 25, 2011

Joe's Paper for Wednesday

Section 3: Because Joe Walker has had trouble posting to his blog, I have posted his narrative argument under Course Content on Blackboard. Please access it there and be ready to workshop it on Wednesday. You do not need to post comments on his blog, but you should write him an extensive note on his paper.

(Section 4, you may disregard.)

Sunday, April 24, 2011

Rebuttals & Rogerians Graded

At long last, grades for all rebuttal and Rogerian arguments have been posted on Blackboard. As I mentioned, I have not posted comments on your blogs in most cases. If you have questions about your grades or want to discuss your revisions, feel free to visit me during my office hours.

The grades you'll see are numerical equivalents of letter grades (A is 95, A- is 92, B+ is 88, etc.).

I will now turn my attention to posting comments on your blogs in response to your narrative drafts. The final draft of this paper is due on your blog on the last day of class, Friday, May 6.

Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Class Cancelled Wednesday; Paper Deadline Extended to Thursday

Two bits of good news for you this week!

1. I've decided to cancel class tomorrow (Wednesday) -- no, not because it's 4/20. As you know, I'm egregiously behind in my paper grading, and for that I'm very sorry. So I'm declaring tomorrow an official grading and writing day. I'll work on grading your papers, beginning at the end of the alphabet this time and working my way backward. I will be grading your rebuttal and Rogerian arguments at the same time. In order to expedite your grades, I will not be posting comments on your final drafts. If you have any questions about your grades, which you can check on Blackboard, you may of course come to my office hours to discuss them.

2. I am extending the deadline for the first draft of your narrative argument to noon on Thursday (4/21). This way, you can have a little extra time, but students will still have access to papers 24 hours in advance of our first narrative argument workshop (see the post below for details). On your own time, please post a reflection on this draft; we won't have time to do this in class on Friday.

See you Friday!

Narrative Argument Workshop Schedule

We'll be workshopping two narrative arguments in each of the next four classes. Here's the schedule:

Fri. 4/22
Francesca and Peggy in section 3; Dan and Joe in section 4

Mon. 4/25
Brian and Courtney in section 3; Ethan W. and Brendan in section 4

Wed. 4/27
Joe and Alex in section 3; Greg T. and Ethan F. in section 4

Fri. 4/29
Jasper and Grace in section 3; Meredith and Molly P. in section 4

As always, please print these essays and bring them to class to discuss, along with printed versions of your posted comments, which you will return to the author. This is the last push of classwork before the end of the semester. Let's give this last round of students some strong feedback.

Saturday, April 16, 2011

Papers Due This Week!

On Monday, April 18, the revision of your Rogerian argument (Essay 3.2) is due on your blog (by the time class starts). (In addition, for Monday, please read the two narrative arguments linked in the post below, by Amy Benfer and Ayelet Waldman.)

On Wednesday, April 20, the first draft of your narrative argument (Essay 4.1) is due on your blog (by the time class starts).

Please remember that you must complete all four papers in order to pass the class. Let me know if you have any questions.

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Rogerian Extension

Because there are a few Rogerian arguments I've yet to comment on, I am extending the deadline for the Rogerian argument revisions until Monday, April 18. Please post your revisions (Essay 3.2) by the time class meets on Monday.

Homework Correction

Today I told those of you in section 3 to read the two essays (by Ayelet Waldman and Amy Benfer) for Friday. Actually, you don't need to read those until Monday; I switched those days in my mind. (See the correct schedule below.) On Friday, we will begin prewriting and brainstorming for our narrative arguments, so bring your ideas for this paper and we'll shape them in class. My apologies for the confusion.

Thursday, April 7, 2011

Narrative Argument Readings & Assignment

Here's our schedule for the remainder (!) of our semester, with links to readings:

Mon. 4/11: Readings from Good Reasons (access via Blackboard), plus “Family Faith: Raising Children in an Interfaith Marriage” by Leah Katz. 
Wed. 4/13: “Minivan Motoring, Or Why I Miss That Old Car Smell” by Sam Patteson. Narrative Techniques.
DVW Series: Fiction writer Sarah Shun-Lien Bynum Reading, Klingenstein Lounge, Egbert Hall, 7:30 p.m.
Fri. 4/15: Essay 3.2 due.  Reflection 3.2 in class.  Prewriting and group brainstorming, Essay 4.
Mon. 4/18: “What’s so wrong with a pregnancy pact?” by Amy Benfer; “Raped by statute” by Ayelet Waldman. 

Wed. 4/20: Essay 4.1 due.  Reflection 4.1.  Sentence Variety.
Fri. 4/22: Essay 4 Workshops (two essays)
Mon. 4/25: Essay 4 Workshops (two essays)
Wed. 4/27: Essay 4 Workshops (two essays)
Fri. 4/29: Essay 4 Workshops (two essays)
Mon. 5/2: Concision.
Wed. 5/4: TBA.
Fri. 5/6: Last day of class.  Essay 4.2 due.  Final reflection in class.

NARRATIVE ARGUMENT ASSIGNMENT

“To be a person is to have a story to tell.”
—Isak Dinesen

We love stories.  Stories are a human currency; they sustain us and give form to formless experience.  Stories, when shaped effectively, can also be powerful arguments.  This assignment will depart from our traditional notion of argument by asking you to consider the power of pathos, example, and persuasive storytelling.

Many of you have used elements of narrative in your previous papers.  However, in this assignment, you will use narrative as your primary method of argument.  Choose a true story that makes a powerful argument, and share it with your audience.  This might mean using one central story to support your claim.  Or, you may need a series of ancillary anecdotes.  These stories could be from your personal experience, the experience of your friends or family, or from experiences you learn about through primary or secondary research.  It will be your job to clearly describe these experiences through concrete detail and sensory language.

While you need not explicitly state your claim and/or reasons, they should be clear to the audience.  This assignment prizes creativity and risk-taking as well as focus and clarity.

Final length: 1200 words, minimum (approximately 3 to 4 pages, double-spaced)

Percentage of final grade: 25

Research: At least three secondary sources are required to support your argument.  As always, your sources must be properly incorporated and documented using the MLA system.  And as always, you should choose the most appropriate and credible type of evidence available.

Topics: The topic of your paper is open.  While I encourage you to be creative and to choose a topic about which you feel strongly, remember that this is an academic paper, and that your topic should meet the needs of an academic audience.  In other words, your purpose should not be simply to share a “lesson,” or your favorite sport, food, song, etc.  For example, you might take a stand on the issue of granting illegal immigrants amnesty by narrating your experience hiring day laborers, living in a city with a large population of illegal immigrants, or being an immigrant yourself.  Or you might take a stand on Title IX based on your experience playing college sports.
               
Office hours: Especially because this is the most challenging assignment yet, I encourage you to see me during my office hours to discuss topics, claims, structure, or any other concerns at any point during your writing process. I also encourage you to visit the Writing Center.

First draft due: Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Second draft due: Friday, May 6, 2011 (last day of class)


GRADING CRITERIA

An “A” paper (90–100):
·      advances a clear, insightful, and original claim and well-defined reasons
·      supports the reasons with sufficient and compelling evidence
·      uses research critically and ethically and incorporates it appropriately
·      is constructed of unified, well-developed paragraphs in logical order with clear transitions
·      makes bold and creative use of narrative techniques to develop and support a point of view
·      demonstrates mastery of documentation, grammar, and formatting
·      shows sophistication, innovation, and creativity with style, diction, and voice

A “B” paper (80–89):
·      advances a clear argumentative purpose, but may lack the insight  or originality of an “A” paper
·      supports the reasons with clear and relevant evidence, but support may lack insight
·      uses research ethically and incorporates it adequately, but analysis may lack insight
·      progresses logically, for the most part, and shows some attempt at transition
·      makes effective use of narrative techniques to develop and support a point of view
·      demonstrates proper documentation and exhibits few grammar and formatting errors
·      provides evidence of an evolving, but perhaps underdeveloped, individual voice

A “C” paper (70–79):
·      demonstrates an attempt, though perhaps inconsistent, at an argumentative purpose
·      provides support, but may contain generalizations, overlook relevant examples, or rely on obvious or clichéd evidence
·      uses research, but research may not be appropriate or incorporated effectively
·      orders paragraphs logically and coherently with, perhaps, a few lapses
·      demonstrates a simplistic understanding of narrative techniques
·      exhibits patterns of grammatical error, but they do not significantly impede meaning
·      documents sources appropriately but perhaps with some lapses in formatting
·      may be simplistic in style or reliant on clichés; may lack sentence variety

A “D” paper (60–69) may lack any of the following:
·      an argumentative purpose
·      sufficient and relevant support
·      analysis of evidence
·      logical paragraph order or clearly defined paragraphs
·      understanding of narrative techniques
·      understanding of grammar or documentation

An “F” paper fails to meet most requirements and/or the writing exhibits serious deficiency.


Monday, April 4, 2011

Monday's Essays

Matthew and Jake's essays are proving difficult to print because of the background color of their blogs. I've posted a Word doc of Jake's essay (section 4) on Blackboard under Course Content and will try to do the same for Matthew's essay (section 3) ASAP.

Thursday, March 31, 2011

Friday's Essays

In both section 3 and section 4, we are missing an essay that you were supposed to comment on by tomorrow (Anna's and Chloe's). In addition, in section 3, Parker's essay is incomplete. Please do what you can to offer comments on his essay and, in section 4, on Michael's essay. You may disregard Anna's and Chloe's blogs.

Tuesday, March 29, 2011

No Class Friday; Rogerian Argument Workshops

Remember that, because of the NCUR taking place on campus this week, our class will not meet this Friday, April 1. (I also will not be on campus for my regular office hours.) Instead, you are asked to make extra-generous comments on the student papers that were scheduled for workshop that day, by Anna and Parker in section 3 and by Chloe and Michael in section 4.

Here are the student papers you need to read for the remainder of the Rogerian workshops:

Mon. 4/4: Matthew and Jessica in section 3; Adiba and Jake in section 4.
Wed. 4/6: Jennifer and Rachel in section 3; Greg B. and Zane in section 4.
Fri. 4/8: Josh in section 3; Mark in section 4.

Monday, March 28, 2011

Rogerian Drafts Due Wed. 3/30!

The first draft of your third essay, a Rogerian argument, is due on your blog by the time class meets on Wednesday, March 30. Title the post "Essay 3.1:" and then give your paper a working title. The draft may be rough, but it must be complete--which means it should be at least 1200 words and include at least three secondary sources, one of which must be scholarly.

Friday, March 25, 2011

Rebuttal Revisions Due Mon. 3/28

Final reminder: the final draft of your rebuttal argument -- if you haven't turned it in already -- is due on your blog on Monday, March 28.

First drafts of your Rogerian argument are due Wed. 3/30, so this weekend is the weekend to begin researching and writing! We'll talk about the progress you're making on Monday (as well as talk about King's essay).

Have a good weekend.

NCUR Fri. 4/1

Our class will not meet on Friday, April 1, since the National Conference on Undergraduate Research will be utilizing all classroom space on campus. Unfortunately, this means Parker and Anna in section 3 and Michael and Chloe in section 4 will have to sacrifice their class workshops and schedule individual conferences the following week with me instead. Please be sure to give them plenty of feedback on their blogs.

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

No Office Hours Today

I am cancelling my office hours this morning because my son has a snow day. If you need to see me, please e-mail me for an appointment. See you in class.

Sunday, March 20, 2011

Rogerian Assignment & Readings

Welcome back! Hope you all had a good break. This week we will begin our study of a third type of argument: Rogerian argument.

On Monday, March 21, we will begin with an introduction to the form and a review of the assignment below.

On Wednesday, March 23, we will discuss readings from Writing Today, including an essay called "Letter to Jim," which I will post on Blackboard by Monday, and do an in-class exercise.

On Friday, March 25, we will discuss Ayelet Waldman's essay "In Defense of the Guilty, Ambivalent, Preoccupied Western Mom," a response to Amy Chua's essay.

On Monday, March 28, we will discuss Martin Luther King, Jr.'s essay "Letter from Birmingham Jail," a response to a statement by Alabama clergymen.

Please print, read, make notes on, and be prepared to discuss all readings in class. Remember that a notebook check is coming up soon!

The first draft of your Rogerian argument is due on Wednesday, March 30.

From Friday, April 1 to Friday, April 8, we will workshop Rogerian drafts. I will provide links to student essays in a future post.

Essay 3 Assignment: Rogerian Argument

“But ... to subdue the spirit of faction, ... to inspire equity, moderation, and charity into men's sentiments and conduct with regard to others, is the genuine test of eloquence.”
            —George Campbell, The Philosophy of Rhetoric


When emotions run high, often the most effective rhetorical strategy is conflict resolution, rather than classical argumentation.  This assignment, which asks you to put into practice Carl Rogers’ idea of “empathic listening,” has several parts:
1. Identify a problem which you believe needs to be resolved.  You should feel strongly about this issue, but you should also be willing to cede some ground.  Write a Rogerian argument that seeks a resolution of the problem, addressing your argument to a resistant audience (you do not need to use the letter format, although you can if you like).  Your essay should, in some form, do the following:
(1) demonstrate an understanding of the opposing view,
(2) present reasons for considering your view,
(3) identify common ground, and
(4) suggest a compromise. 
While a sound Rogerian argument often takes this basic form, variations exist, and I encourage you to experiment with methods of moving beyond this outline.  It is more important that your argument embodies Rogerian ideals than that it follows the proper formula.
Your first draft is due on you blog on Wednesday, March 30.  In your heading, label your paper Essay 3.1. 
After receiving feedback from me (and, for some of you, the entire class), write a second draft of your essay.  This final draft, known as your “Rogerian Portfolio,” is due on your blog on Friday, April 15.  It must include the following:
·         Prewriting
·         Draft 1 (with comments from me and, for some, the whole class)
·         Reflection 1
·         Draft 2 (in your heading, label your paper Essay 3.2)
·         Reflection 2
·         Any other notes that document your process along the way (outlines, notes taken during research or workshop, etc.) (be sure to identify them clearly)
The grade you receive on the portfolio will be based on the final product as well as the process it reflects.  All parts must be present in order for the portfolio to be considered complete.

Final length: 1200 words, minimum (approximately 3 to 4 double-spaced pages)

Percentage of final grade: 20

Research: Effective research is as important in a Rogerian argument as it is in a rebuttal, because you must demonstrate that you have a comprehensive understanding of both sides of the issue.  So, you should use your research not only to support your own view, but to describe the opposing view as well.  You must perform adequate research to include at least three secondary sources (print and/or online); at least one of these sources must be scholarly.  You may also use primary sources if you wish.  Wikipedia and other “info” sites such as about.com and dictionary.com are not appropriate sources; you may use other encyclopedias or dictionaries, but they are discouraged and do not count as sources.  

Format: Your paper must be formatted and your sources documented in MLA format according to OWL.

Topics: The topic of your paper is open.  While Rogerian argument is often appropriate for age-old, hot-button, “culture war” issues, if you choose one of these, consider ways of making your argument unique.  Use Rogerian ideals to your advantage by advancing the conversation about your issue.  The strongest papers will likely make the old new by revealing thoughtful, sincere, personal, creative, and critical thinking.
                                                                                         
Additional help: I encourage you to see me during my office hours to discuss arguments, claims, structure, or any other concerns at any point during your writing process.  Remember that the Writing Center is also an excellent resource for extra feedback (if you visit the Writing Center, include documentation as part of your portfolio).


Grading Criteria
An “A” paper (90–100):
·      advances a clear, insightful, and original claim and well-defined reasons
·      supports the reasons with sufficient and compelling evidence
·      uses research critically and ethically and incorporates it appropriately
·      is constructed of unified, well-developed paragraphs in logical order with clear transitions
·      demonstrates advanced understanding and execution of Rogerian techniques
·      demonstrates mastery of documentation, grammar, and formatting
·      shows sophistication, innovation, and creativity with style, diction, and voice
A “B” paper (80–89):
·      advances a clear argumentative purpose, but may lack the insight  or originality of an “A” paper
·      supports the reasons with clear and relevant evidence, but support may lack insight
·      uses research ethically and incorporates it adequately, but analysis may lack insight
·      progresses logically, for the most part, and shows some attempt at transition
·      demonstrates incipient understanding of Rogerian techniques
·      demonstrates proper documentation and exhibits few grammar and formatting errors
·      provides evidence of an evolving, but perhaps underdeveloped, individual voice
A “C” paper (70–79):
·      demonstrates an attempt, though perhaps inconsistent, at an argumentative purpose
·      provides support, but may contain generalizations, overlook relevant examples, rely on obvious or clichéd evidence, or take warrants for granted
·      uses research, but research may not be appropriate or incorporated effectively, and analysis may not go beyond the obvious
·      orders paragraphs logically and coherently with, perhaps, a few lapses
·      demonstrates a simplistic understanding of Rogerian techniques
·      exhibits patterns of grammatical error, but they do not significantly impede meaning
·      documents sources appropriately but perhaps with some lapses in formatting
·      may be simplistic in style or reliant on clichés; may lack sentence variety
­A “D” paper (60–69) may lack any of the following:
·      an argumentative purpose
·      sufficient and relevant support
·      analysis of evidence
·      logical paragraph order or clearly defined paragraphs
·      understanding of Rogerian techniques
·      understanding of grammar or documentation
An “F” paper fails to meet most requirements and/or the writing exhibits serious deficiency.

Oops!

I made a mistake in a previous post, stating that the due date for the revision of your rebuttal argument is Monday, March 28. It should be Monday, March 21, the day we return from break. Hopefully most of you recognized the error and are still planning to complete your drafts by tomorrow. But to be fair, I will extend the deadline until next Monday, March 28.

That said, I encourage you to finish your revisions as soon as possible so you can move on to your next assignment: the Rogerian argument.

Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Rebuttal Comments

Hope you're enjoying your break! I'm enjoying reading your rebuttal arguments and many of you already have comments from me waiting on your blogs. (I'm working backward from Z to A this time, so those with last names at the end of the alphabet will see comments first.) Please take these comments into consideration as you revise over break. If you don't have a comment yet, you will see it there by tomorrow (Wednesday, March 16). You should also have a brief comment on the final draft of your rhetorical analysis as well as a grade on Blackboard.

A few of you either don't have completed drafts posted or you posted the wrong blog address on the master class list (which means I can't access your draft at all). Please check your e-mail to see if this is the case and get in touch with me ASAP so I can give you feedback.

Remember that the revision of your rebuttal is due the day we return from break, Monday, March 21. Post version 2.2 to your blog by the time class begins. If you have questions about my comments or about your revision, feel free to e-mail me at ehenderson@ithaca.edu.

Thursday, March 10, 2011

Workshops for Fri. 3/11

For Friday, March 11, section 3 should read Julia's essay (just one!). Please comment on the first version of her draft, not the updated version.

Section 4 should read essays by Avery and Lindsay (note that this reflects a change from the Blackboard schedule).

Final Rebuttal Drafts Due Mon. 3/28

The final draft of your rebuttal argument is due on your blog by the time class meets on Monday, March 28, the day we return from Spring Break. I will do my best to have comments on your first drafts posted by this Monday, March 21 so you will have the week to revise. If you have questions about your papers over break, I will be available via e-mail (ehenderson@ithaca.edu). While I can't read entire new drafts and comment on them, I am happy to answer specific questions you have. Good luck and have a good break!

Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Spring Break

I hope that many of you will be in class on Friday to contribute to our last rebuttal workshop. But for those of you who won't be, please be prepared to read the papers of the student(s) scheduled for workshop and provide feedback by Friday. Normally when you're absent, you have until the next class to turn in a manuscript to a student, but because final drafts are due when you return from spring break, your feedback will not be useful at that point.

I will post links to students' papers for Friday's workshop later today.

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Workshops for Wed. 3/9

For Wednesday, March 9, section 3 should read essays by Besa and Cassie. Section 4 should read essays by Molly Schneider and Elizabeth (even though Elizabeth's essay was originally scheduled for Friday).

Monday, March 7, 2011

Colby's Paper

Section 3: if you're having trouble printing Colby Gee's rebuttal, I've posted it as a Word document on our Blackboard page under Course Content. (Section 4, you can disregard.)

As long as my car can make it to campus today, class is on!

Sunday, March 6, 2011

No Office Hours Mon. 3/7

I am cancelling my office hours tomorrow, Monday, March 7, because of the snow. If you need to meet with me, please e-mail me to make an appointment at another time. Class will meet as scheduled.

Saturday, March 5, 2011

Workshops for Mon. 3/7

For Monday, section 3 should read essays by Justine and Colby. Section 4 should read essays by Caleale and Joni. Remember that you need to print and read the two essays, make marginal comments on the two essays, post comments on the two students' blogs, and print your comments to bring to class.

Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Workshops Begin Friday!

Your homework for Friday, March 2, is to read, print, and comment on two student rebuttal drafts. (See the post below titled The Workshop for full details.)

Section 3 (2:00) should read essays by Caleb and Drew, and section 4 (3:00) should read essays by Becca and Christina. Please be thorough and thoughtful in your comments, and be ready to talk about them on Friday.

If you are absent, you are responsible for checking the workshop schedule posted under Course Content on Blackboard to keep up with the workshop. You should also be keeping track of the workshop process through the course schedule, included in the syllabus. Also, if your essay is up for discussion in class, you are still responsible for reading and commenting on the other student's essay.

Two Blog Requests

1. In order to make it easier for me and others to read your blog, please space between paragraphs, but do not indent them. If you would like to reformat your latest draft, please do (but do not make any other changes to this draft until you've received comments from me).

2. In order to make it easier for me and others to comment on your blog, please go to your Dashboard, then Settings, then Comments. Next to "Show word verification for comments?" click on "No."

Proofreaders' Marks

Here is a chart that features common proofreaders' marks. This chart may come in handy when deciphering the marks that I make on your manuscripts, and I encourage you to use these marks when reading other students' drafts (as well as your own).

Tuesday, March 1, 2011

The Workshop

Here is some information about what to expect from the workshop process--and what is expected of you.  We will review this information in class on Wednesday, March 2.

The purpose of workshops is to give you the opportunity to exchange ideas about and comment on each other’s drafts. Regular communication with others and exchange of works in progress is an indispensable element of a writer’s work. As a member of the workshop group, you should approach this assignment thoroughly and seriously. Think of yourself not as a critic, or an editor, but as a reader whose task is to provide the author with help and enable better revision.

Over the course of the semester, you will read and respond to one essay by every student in the class.  For each student essay that you read, you will take several steps in providing feedback:

1.       Access the student paper on the student’s blog and print it. (See the workshop schedule posted under Course Content on our Blackboard page for the names of the student(s) being workshopped on any given day. Usually, you will read two essays for each class.)

2.       Read the paper and make notes on the manuscript as appropriate, recording your questions and comments in the margins. 

3.       On the student’s blog, use the Comment function to compose a brief (multi-paragraph) note addressed to the writer that summarizes your response to the essay.  Your comments should contain praise as well as constructive criticism and are intended to prepare you to discuss the essay in class.

4.       Print the comments you made on the blog and staple them to the top of the printed essay.  After the workshop, you will return the manuscript with your comments to the student.

You will receive a single grade for your online workshop comments, worth 15% of your final grade, at the end of the semester.

When commenting on other students’ drafts, follow these principles:

• Your job is not to judge the draft as if it were a finished piece, but to help it become better. Do not pay too much attention to grammar and mechanics—you are not an editor. Instead, advise the writer on the content.

• Tell the writer what you think the draft is saying. Praise the good aspects of the draft and explain why you like what you like. If a writer knows what he or she has done well, chances are that he or she will try to do more of the same next time.

• Make specific comments on specific parts of the paper. Don’t just say “It’s good” or “You need to revise.” Such comments are not very useful.

• Be kind, but don’t be nice. Telling the author that everything in the paper is great when it is lacking something is doing the author a disservice.

• If you are the author, listen carefully to the impressions that your work is making on readers. If they get a meaning out of it which you did not intend, make the necessary changes. You are not obliged to do everything your readers are asking for, but it is your responsibility to consider their comments with an open mind. Each workshop is intended to be an opportunity for you to learn more about your own writing.

Workshops begin on Friday, March 4!

Monday, February 28, 2011

Rebuttal Drafts Due Wed. 3/2

Final reminder: Essay 2.1 is due on your class blog by the time class meets this Wednesday, March 2. Please refer back to the assignment details before posting your paper.

Remember that this paper--even the first draft--must include at least two secondary sources, one of which must be scholarly, and this research must be sufficiently cited (with in-text citations and a Works Cited page) and incorporated. I encourage you to utilize OWL as a resource when writing your paper.

Good luck!

Workshop Schedule

I have posted the class workshop schedule under Course Content on Blackboard (one schedule for section 3 and one for section 4). Please note the date you are signed up to have your paper workshopped in class. It's crucial that you are present in class that day to receive class feedback. (If you were absent today, I randomly drew a date for you.)

This is the schedule that you will be accessing regularly in order to keep track of whose papers are up for discussion in class. Even if you are absent in class, it is your responsibility to keep up with the workshop schedule and to provide feedback to the appropriate authors.

We'll talk more about the workshop process in class on Wednesday.

Saturday, February 26, 2011

Essay 2.1 Due Wednesday

Here's a preview of the big week ahead...
Monday 2/28: Quiz on Documentation. Workshop Date Drawing. Incorporation Presentation.
Wednesday 3/2: The first draft of your rebuttal argument is due!
Friday 3/4: Workshops begin!

I'm really pleased to see that many of you are using your blogs to continue your pre-writing and even to keep track of your research. This may be a useful tool for you, and it also helps me to peek into your process when I evaluate your portfolios. So keep up the good researching and writing.

I'm enjoying reading your rhetorical analyses and will aim to have all of them graded by Wednesday, when your next paper is due. You can check your blog (specifically the essay 1.2 entry) for my comments and Blackboard for your grade. Please note that I have to enter numeric grades, but they correspond directly to letter grades (95=A, 92=A-, 88=B+, 85=B, and so on...).

Friday, February 25, 2011

Class Cancelled

I am cancelling class for today, Friday, February 25, because of the snowstorm.  To make up for the missed class, please view and listen to this recorded lecture on Documentation.  This is a very important lesson that will help you make decisions about citing your research in MLA format. 

Be prepared to take a brief quiz on the material in class on Monday.  The quiz will be open-note, and you will also have access to the OWL website during your quiz.  So you do not need to write down or memorize the form for citing each kind of source.  But you need to have a basic understanding of how and why sources are cited.

Have a good weekend and enjoy the snow!

Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Addendum to Rebuttal Assignment

Please note that your rebuttal argument must contain a minimum of two secondary sources, and at least one of these sources must be scholarly.

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Research, Documentation & Incorporation

The next three classes will be important ones to attend. We will be discussing research and its proper and effective use.  But in case you must miss class, here are three recorded lectures, on Research, Documentation, and Incorporation. Again, these were recorded for a previous class, so disregard anything that seems irrelevant to our class. You do not need to take the quizzes after these lectures, but you are strongly encouraged to view these lectures so that you don't miss out on important information for your papers.